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Thursday, September 20, 2007

New AMD Ad

"Leading the industry again, this time its Quad Core."

My version:

"Mangling English again, this time it's run-on sentences."

2 comments:

  1. Hmm... This doesn't feel like a run-on sentence to me, exactly. I don't know if there is a tech term for what I think is really wrong with it; I'd call it deficient reference.

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  2. I think "Leading the industry again" is shorthand for "AMD is leading the industry again," so each is a complete sentence, and the whole is a run-on. I stand by my claim.

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