Points belabored. The obvious stated and overstated. We put the long in winded!
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Thursday, July 07, 2011
On the Ladder
You stumble
Down the steps
Of a ladder
In a well
That ladder
Has a base
That base
Is in hell
That hell
Is in your mind
As it stumbles
Down the steps
Of a ladder
Very good. Original work?
ReplyDeleteHell is recursion.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Yes, it is.
ReplyDeleteNeat poem. Now just hire Bob Murphy to do the song version.
ReplyDeleteThanks, PSH. It is actually written to be a Leonard Cohen-ish song, and I've begun composing it already.
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