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Monday, June 18, 2012

A Professional Writer Wrote This Sentence

Here: "That would be the fire James showed in chasing rebounds, he had 14 of them, including five offensive, and his defense on Durant in the fourth quarter."

1 comment:

  1. And the rest of the article was terrible as well. It wasn't necessarily grammatically incorrect, but it was all really clunky and unwieldy. I should think about submitting some sports articles if that's the quality writing that's getting published on a major website.

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